Grace, my favorite part of this poem is what you leave OUT. You hint, but don't hammer-- and as a result your poem is delicate, elegant, and lets the reader indulge in just enough of his own idiosyncrasies-- like a child.
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Grace, my favorite part of this poem is what you leave OUT. You hint, but don't hammer-- and as a result your poem is delicate, elegant, and lets the reader indulge in just enough of his own idiosyncrasies-- like a child.
ReplyDeleteLove the apostrophizing to Innocence.
The last dash is very Dickinson-esque. :)
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